V1Ch7: Part 3
Translator: Soafp
“….What is this?”
The man who tried to play the fan disc he received immediately tilted his head and muttered to himself.
The moment he installed the game and started it up, the above text appeared and disappeared like the opening movie.
Now it was already on the title screen, a slightly lonely but fantastic song was playing, and Ayana was shown wearing a black hood.
The beginning is totally different from the last one.
In the previous work, the title was read out by a random heroine to the boisterous music, but that voice was not recorded this time.
The man composed himself and selected “From the Beginning” to start the game.
“…………….”
He played the contents of the fan disc all the way through without taking a break.
Then, staring at the ending screen, he let out a gasp, leaned back deeply against the back of his chair, and opened his mouth.
“…… Nasty. Ayana is in trouble.”
That’s the word I finally managed to squeeze out.
It was a work that had received many high ratings on the Internet, and was as complicated as the fact that it was originally a fan disc of a cuckold game, which made him reluctant to buy it.
However, after actually playing the game, he thought about it, which was all contained in the words that the man had just uttered.
“This kind of erotic game is not common. Who could have predicted such a thing?”
The fan disc of ” I was robbed of everything ” — it was a story centered on Ayana, who was not depicted in the main story, and it was a story of revenge against those who despaired of Towa, whom she loved so much.
The man could not have been more surprised to learn that Ayana was involved in all the cases of his Senpai, junior, her younger sister and her mother, who were portrayed as cuckold heroines, and that her meeting with Shu and her subsequent guidance in building a relationship with him were carefully explained.
Although it was shocking to see Ayana driven by hatred to a degree that could never be imagined from the main story, she was always smiling and very cute and endearing in front of Towa.
[I love you, Towa-kun. …… I love you.]
In addition to flirting behind Shu’s back, there were also numerous intense scenes, and the number of H scenes, which had only occurred once in the main series, had increased to the point where it seemed like a lie.
Of course, Ayana’s appearance was only in front of Towa, and the sight of her enjoying happiness and pleasure in a disorderly manner was truly a privilege reserved only for Towa.
“For Ayana, Towa was that special. …… I see, so that’s why it’s pure love.”
The man finally understood what it meant that it was not a cuckold but pure love, that was written in the impression.
The man chuckled at Ayana’s hidden nature, or rather, since the fan disc is mainly from Ayana’s point of view, it is possible to understand what is on her mind.
Ayana’s true feelings were revealed, and she was really foul-mouthed about things she didn’t like, though less frequently.
“For example, this scene…..”
Ayana’s voice echoed as soon as the man began to replay the scene that bothered her.
[You gotta be kidding me, that b*tch! You interrupted me and Towa’s time!]
Ayana’s voice is heard in the scene.
Since the contents of the fan disc are complementary to the main story, the linking of all kinds of scenes also thrilled and excited the man.
The bad-mouth moment is when Ayana goes home with Towa and runs into Kotone by chance, and after they say a few things to each other.
Ayana’s use of honorifics was originally a barrier to keep her distance from Shu and the rest of his family, but playing the role of her polite self has a way of repressing that.
The story of how Ayana came to use honorifics and the release of her repressed feelings by becoming a badass with a bad mouth was also an interesting setup that left a strong impression on the audience.
It is not an exaggeration to say that men have liked Ayana since the main story, but they like her even more now that they have played the fan disc.
“……Oh, I never imagined this kind of thing.”
The man dove into the Internet to write down his impressions of the fan disc and found the developer’s comments on the official website.
Normally, he would not be interested in such things, but since they were the creators of the game, he was curious and went to the page, and was astonished.
[I think people who played the game probably felt the hate for Shu and his family. There were a few scenes that I honestly thought were too much, but when I tried to express Ayana’s madness in detail, it ended up that way. The staff regretted that they felt sorry for Senpai and the Junior. Now, have you played the second round of the game? The ending of the second lap changes the direction a little.]
This was the developer’s comment.
“What?!”
The comment fell on deaf ears to the man.
Leaving the page behind, the man started up the game again and took advantage of the skip to get to the ending at once.
“I’m at the end, and it’s the same ……, right?”
There is no particular change in the scene where the credit is being played, and the picture of Towa and Ayana holding hands and walking toward the light is also unchanged.
“…… Hmm?”
However, the picture of these two happy people began to change.
Ayana’s figure disappeared and all that was left was Towa, and then Towa’s figure also disappeared. These words appeared on the screen.
“Ayana is in my arms. She is smiling all the time. Seeing her smile makes me happy too. But …… is this really the right thing to do.”
The words disappeared and then reappeared.
“She acted out of love for me. But in a real sense, it was me who broke her heart because I couldn’t …… notice anything. Maybe it was also …… myself who took that kind girl away from me.”
The game ended with those words as the real ending.
The man was stunned for a moment, but then he came to himself and turned his gaze back to the developer’s comments section again.
[In fact, Towa doesn’t know what Ayana did in the main story. So this is a feature that the staff added just for the fun of it, in case he would realize it later. What I’m trying to say is that Ayana was already broken and couldn’t stop herself from doing what she did. This is the end of this game, but …… yes I guess so. If there had been someone with a more special perspective, not Towa or Ayana in the game, I think it would have been a much happier ending for both of them. Revenge gives you a sense of accomplishment for a moment, but all that comes after is a feeling of emptiness. Well, no matter how it turns out, it will be a bitter ending for Shu (Lol).]
The developer’s comment concluded.
“A third party with a special point of view……huh”
The man muttered quietly and thought about it.
The end of the game is ostensibly a happy ending for Towa and Ayana, but at the root of it all, nothing is resolved and Ayana is left broken.
The fan disc talks not only about Ayana, but also about Towa, who truly loved Ayana with all his heart.
“……. I’m sure he won’t forgive her. If Towa knew about Ayana…”
The man nodded his head and nodded that he would surely not allow it.
The man’s impression of Towa had changed dramatically, he was just a kind-hearted boy who had feelings for Ayana.
But Towa didn’t realize until the end that Ayana had always been trapped in her past and hatred for him.
“I’m sure it would have been nice if there had been some kind of trigger ……”
Yes, if there had been a chance, Towa and Ayana would have been able to walk towards happiness in the true sense of the word.
If there was an event that accepted the environment surrounding Towa and then overcome the sadness and hatred as Towa pulled away from Ayana’s hand, then surely there would have been…….
“Haha, I can’t help thinking this way”
This game is now complete, so there is no point in any kind of imagination.
Still, because of their emotional involvement with the characters, the man dreamed of such a world that could possibly have come true.
“……Hmm?”
The man looked into the computer screen as if he had noticed something, but nothing in particular.
Tilting his head in a funny way, the man left the room, but shortly thereafter, the computer screen glowed suspiciously.
Hc
March 8, 2023 at 6:20 pmSo Ayana is the real MC of the game story?
PennyLost
March 8, 2023 at 8:09 pmWell, guess I called it: None of that NTR stuff was justified. It was all the result of a broken girl who took any slight towards the love of her life as grounds for ruining a person’s life.
The main surprise is that Towa was completely innocent!
….though perhaps he’s also kinda stupid, as well.
Let’s hope the reincarnated MC actually gets off his backside and actually do what Towa couldn’t do so everyone can just go on with their lives, yeah?
Yes, Im including Shu in this. Pretty sure a kid like him would grow up better without Ayana enabling his passiveness….maybe.
TehGodofDoooom
March 9, 2023 at 3:16 amI don’t think Ayana enabled his passiveness, as much as his surroundings made him a spoiled coward who has had everything he wanted given to him, in a sense. It’s also why even though he’s been raised with a mentality of ‘ayana being his’ he doesn’t actually do anything for it and just takes her for granted.
BrodyWonderland
March 8, 2023 at 9:37 pmThis is one heck of a tone shift for the entire story.
From the MC being relegated as the “bull” of the cucktale, trying to stop “himself” from cucking his friend; to a deuteragonist of a deranged mad-woman’s road to destroy Shu’s life while bringing down the other unsuspecting heroines with him.
I’m pretty sure the MC will fix this one way or another, but holy s**t this not where I was expecting the story to go.
Hc
March 9, 2023 at 12:16 amSo shu is not the MC of the game story but it was Ayana huh.?
Ab
March 9, 2023 at 12:52 amIt’s a matter of perspective. Shu is the MC of the NTR game but it seems like Ayana was responsible for setting up those NTR events to make Shu’s life miserable for revenge. You don’t see that in the main game but on the fan disc in which she’s technically the MC. The reincarnated dude appears to be the third party that’s meant to prevent Ayana from doing her revenge and just let her be happy.
Hopefully this chapter is a flashback and MC will actually remember it next chapter so that he can take action soon. It will be interesting to see how that happens. Based on the author’s other works I’m guessing it will be proactive steps towards a relationship with Ayana and loveydovey fluff to fill up her heart and stop obsession with revenge?
Hc
March 9, 2023 at 12:20 amSo Ayana is the real MC of the game story?
yoshsreads
March 9, 2023 at 12:29 amBe careful how you raise your kids, folks.
PennyLost
March 9, 2023 at 2:09 amWell, guess I called it: None of that NTR stuff was justified. It was all the result of a broken girl who took any slight towards the love of her life as grounds for ruining a person’s life.
The main surprise is that Towa was completely innocent!
….though perhaps he’s also kinda stupid, as well.
Let’s hope the reincarnated MC actually gets off his backside and actually do what Towa couldn’t do so everyone can just go on with their lives, yeah?
Yes, Im including Shu in this. Pretty sure a kid like him would grow up better without Ayana enabling his passiveness….maybe.
TehGodofDoooom
March 9, 2023 at 9:16 amI don’t think Ayana enabled his passiveness, as much as his surroundings made him a spoiled coward who has had everything he wanted given to him, in a sense. It’s also why even though he’s been raised with a mentality of ‘ayana being his’ he doesn’t actually do anything for it and just takes her for granted.
PennyLost
March 9, 2023 at 11:27 amI’m not discarding the other facts for his passiveness but Ayana is still very much part of that, since she was raised to be his “accessory”. You could say him not being told or shown directly that she doesn’t see him that way and likely never will is a big part of why he’s the way he is, if the one chapter dedicated to his POV was any indication. Though I wonder where you got the idea of him believing “Ayana is his” rather than “the only one I love is Ayana”, which is what I got from him so far.
To be honest…I still think the author should have bothered to show even a bit more of Shu as a character, because a lot of what can be interpreted on him has less to do with what he has been shown doing and more to do with him not being written to do anything period. It’s why back then (and still now) I mentioned how Shu came off as less of a character and more of a plot device for Ayana’s and Towa’s sake.
In other words…the story so far is treating him like Ayana was raised to act in relation to him. An accessory without its personal goals or wants.
He’s not well written as a character as of yet by my estimate. It’s part of the reason why I’m hoping that this is a sign of the MC actually getting down and changing things, because of of what little has been confirmed about Shu is that whatever comes out of this actually has a chance for Shu to plausibly get the kick in the backside a passive character like him would need to grow up and actually be more active.
OreoChoc
March 9, 2023 at 3:26 amIn both games, Ayana remained a broken girl until the end. There was no [True End] to the story. Perhaps the original Towa wanted that as well, and had the present Towa to do something about it.
Thx for thr translation!
BrodyWonderland
March 9, 2023 at 3:37 amThis is one heck of a tone shift for the entire story.
From the MC being relegated as the “bull” of the cucktale, trying to stop “himself” from cucking his friend; to a deuteragonist of a deranged mad-woman’s road to destroy Shu’s life while bringing down the other unsuspecting heroines with him.
I’m pretty sure the MC will fix this one way or another, but holy s**t this not where I was expecting the story to go.
K Banzarey
May 14, 2023 at 7:56 pmI 100 precent agree with you but its amazing how it is
Krozam
July 27, 2023 at 3:42 amThe TL/editor really dropped the ball with the amount of times “man” was misspelled as “men” in this chapter, lol.
At least they realise that the NTR stuff hurt innocents, and I suppose it’s up to the MC of this story now to change the direction before the bad ending happens again.